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Old 01-15-2009, 12:44 AM   #1
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Default Love Story 2020.....PART 8....

Hey guys…dis is LOVE STORY 2020…..PART 8 FR U GUYS….i did not think I wud get such gr8 responses yaar…and thanq soooooooooo much…u guys…do encourage me…to write more….and I luv writing…

So heres part 6 and part 7…followed by PART 8…so njoi…



PART 6-



Armaan luks at riddhima…wid tears building up in his eyes..riddhima…jst luks at dat..and world cums to a halt fr her….” Y is armaan crying???”…..she thinks this in her mind….as to not accept da wrost thing..which she neither wants to hear…..armaan cums wlaking towards her…and she moves behind..as if to run away frm dat worst news..she does not want to hear it…she does not want to admit it…accept it….she keeps moving her paces…behind..slowly as he keeps cumin forward towards her….she moves nodding her head…saying..” no…no…no way armaan….u r not goin to utter a word….no…”….

Armaan hold her arms tight…bringing her close to him..: riddhima!!!!! Riddhima.!!!!..listen to me….

Riddhima: no….no armaan…

Armaan: riddhima….its not angel…!!!!

Listening dis…she pays no attention frst…and then…when she realizes…n cums bac to normal…she ws sooo much carried by da pain thinking dat it ws angel..now it becums difficult fr her to accept dat its not angel……but then aftr a while…tears burst out…and she falls hard on armaan’s chest….happy…n broken as well..thinking dat god has been sooo generous dat it ws not angel…and she also thinking dat if it wud have been angel..she wud b completely shattered…..jst the thot of it..ws killing her…and she crying hard…on armaan…evn armaan cud not control it..and soo tears rolled thru his cheeks as well..thankin god..dat it ws not angel…..but he had to behave strong then…to hold riddhima…and most important of dat ws….” Where ws angel???”



Armaan: riddhima….yeh tym roney ka nahi hai….humey toh khush hona chahiye tht it ws not angel..woh koi dusri choti ladki thi..and uske father usey waha lene aa gaye the..jab mein waha gaya….riddhima..stop crying….

Riddhima: controls her all emotions then….: hmmm…..par phir..angel kahan hai???

Armaan: wohi…mein dekhta hu…tum yehi rukna..plzz…kahin mat jaana….ok???

Riddhima: ok…

And so armaan goes towards da ice-cream man…inquiring abt angel….its been..15m inutes…since armaan has gone…and angel not yet wid her…riddhima becomes restless like hell now….she cnt take it nymore…and soo she too gets up..in search of angel…jst foregetting armaan’s words…as if he never told her to wait….

Jst as she moves..in da opposite direction..wher armaan had gone..n is disappeared…armaan cums in….and finds tht riddhima too is missing….now…dis agitates armaan….as hes frustrated not finding angel..and riddhima also not in place…tohugh he warned her to b there…..he gets frustrated tht now he has to luk fr riddhima as well….he becomes really angry on riddhima now….

Now armaan also goes da direction where riddhima had gone….he wlks a while n moves towards da sandpit…and he is shocked n surprised by wat he sees there…..he sees there..riddhima and angel..together…and angelplaying…on da slide….he gets furious…adding more to his anger…and walks towards riddhima..

Armana: RIDDHIMA!!!!

Riddhima..trns bac….

Armaan: wat da hell is dis??

Riddhima….had totally forgotten to infrm armaan dat she had found angel in da sandpit..but it ws not her fault as well….da moment she saw angel..she jst hugged her….and jst forgot dat armaan ws in search of angel as well…..wen she saw him cumin towards her..she came bac to normal….and felt guilty of not infrming him…

Riddhima: oh..armaan….jab tum gaye..meiney kaafi der tak intezaark iya..mujhsey raha nahi gaya..aur mein yaahaa dekhne aa gayi..n found angel here…

Armaan: and u were least bothered to infrm me…thers something called mobile??? U know how restless ws I as well..???

Angel: ohh mama..daddy..cum here..we’l play together..plzz..(angel says dis..as she deos not know how much confusion n horror she ALONE had brought to her parents….and armaan and ridhdima did not make her feel dat till now….)

Armaan really agitated now : ANGEL.!!!!! Jst cum dwn frm dat slide…its quite high..n its not fr u….neeche aao…abhi…

Riddhiam jst cuts him…

Riddhima: armaan..plzzz iss baat sey khush ho ki who humein mili hai.... sahi salaamat..aisey gussey mein mat aao…im sorry…im sorry…

Armaan…: riddhima…she is my daughter as well…he says this grinding his teeth…and riddhima finds out how angry he is at da moment wid her….

Armaan: jst cum dwn angel!!!!

Riddhima: armaan…let her play..fr a while..til we have a tlk….plzzzz…

Armaan: enuff of our tlk…we better go home now….i jst want to c angel....safe at home..at dis moment..i think..its enuff I had da whole day…at hospital.then wid dat gal’s accident..n ur CARELESSNESS….and..

Riddhima: carelessness??? Armaan…cum on…u cnt blame me on dis completely…I said im sorry ….par armaan…mein bhi kya karti…angel ko dkehte hi..mein sab bhool gayi…I jst ws lost wid her…

Armaan: bhool gayi?? How cud u riddhima?? How cud u b soo careless….??? Or is it tht u …..and he paused….thinking whter to say or not…

Riddhima: tht i…..wat???...wat armaan??? Speak up…

Armaan….jst diverting….shoutsl oud at angel now..: ANGEL….HOW MANY TYMS DO I TELL U TO GET OUT OF DAT MONSTER…???

Angel gets scared…by armaan loud voice..and jst shivers….thinking y her..best daddy is behaving like dis….like a MONSTER….

Riddhima: stop it armaan!!!! Dun take ur frustration out on angel..if she wants to play then let her….u dare do dat….mujh par gussa ho…toh mujh par nikaalo..not on her…



Armaan: riddhima…listen…he moves towards her and than..suddenly….

“AHHHH……” n they both hear..a thud sound….a big one….

Armaan and riddhima…both trn…n luk….da horror….angel all lying on da ground…angel…lost her balance..when armaan’s voice came like a monster…she jst got scared luking her daddy like dat…(no doubt evn riddhima ws scared like hell when she saw armaan angry….evry1 knows it..as we also have seen tht)…..she fell dwn hitting her head on da iron post of da slide..and finally crashin on da sand…

Armaan and riddhima both luked in a shock….angel ws jst lying on da ground…but when they both ran towards her….they both jst stood ther…in a state of shock….but when they saw the blood slwly oozing…and soaking da sand….they both lost it….riddhima..fell on ground…and armaan…bent dwn…

Riddhima: angel…..angel…beta…get up sweetie…

Armaan: angel…sweetie..dekho daddy yaha par hai…angel…im sorry beta…I shouted like dat..im sorry beta..now stop foolin me..chalo get….

Though they both saw blood gushin out….they jst cudn c their..their own angel hurt…

Riddhima: armaan…kuch karo…plzzzz fr god sake…meri beti..angel..ka kitna khoon beh gaya hai..plzzzz kuch karo…..and she cries…to her heart…

Armaan.jst picks up angel..and they both rush to da nearest hospital….

They enter da hospital “JEEVAN”…..as they dun wanna waste tym..goin to sannjeevni now as it ws a lil far…..n they wud c to it later….armaan holding angel in his hands….his shirt..completly drenched wid her blood..and da sight of dat…making riddhima shiver….as shez holding angel's head..trying to figure where da blood’s oozing frm so dat she cud stop it…..da nurses and few ward boys approach them….and get a stretcher….he makes her lie dwn on da stretcher….and both of them….wlk briskly wid da stretcher…where angel ws taken fr examination…..and at a point…armaan and riddhima were stopped n not let inside….

Armaan ws held bac by few wrd boys…and riddhima by nurses…as angel ws taken in alone….

Armana: chodho mujhey….im a doctor as well….get ur hands off me…shez my daughter…n im a doctor…frm sanjeevni…MR ARMAAN MALLIK….do u get dat??? He says dis to da ward boys holding him bac…

Doctor: u r…mr mallik..surely a doctor…frm sanjeevni..but not here…and as its my duty…let me handle it….plzzzz…..he says dis kindly to armaan…

Doctor: as u r a relative of hers..

Armaan: FATHER!!!!! IM HER FATHER….!!!!

Doctor: yea certainly…u r..but as u may b knowing dat relative patients r not given to doctors…u know da rule…its there in sanjeevni as well….plzzz co-operate mr mallik…im sure…aftr examination…and lil bit of tests…u cn shift her to sanjeevni…but thts not da call fr da moment..plzz let me do my work..n plzz b co-operative…

Armaan…controlled his anger…pain…frustration bac…by tightening his fists….and standinf there still..as he jst nodded his head giving an indication to da doctor dat he cud go on wid da chek up….but soon….

Da doctor leaves…and sooo does all da nurses n ward boys…

Armaan turns bac….finds..ridhdima…crying…taking da support of da wall…she luks at him…wants him..at dis moment…his support…his shoulders…she luks at him yearningly…he jst luks at her….then suddenly his xpression trns cold…gives her a tuff luk…and makes a quick move frm there…..she knows wher hes goin….but she is jst tooooo numb now..evn to move…as she feels sooo weak….

Aftr a few minutes…..she goes to where armaan is….ofcourse…at da fire-escape…but of dis hospital “JEEVAN”….HES STITTING ON DA STAIRS…CRYING..LIKE AN INNOCENT BABY….(jst da way he ws crying at minnies case)

She cums frm behind….keeps her hand on his shoulder….he luks at her…gets up…tears in his eyes..but he wipes them off…

Armaan moves her hand wid a harsh sway..: u dare!!!!! U dare say anything riddhima….

Riddhima: arr..armaan..kya…..

Armaan: stop it riddhima….u have been soo careless today…..

She goes towards him…wid tears in her eyes…holds his face wid her one hand….hoping she cud cry on his shoulders…but he jst removes her hand…so roughly…

Armaan: and u dare touch me now!!!!

Riddhima is jst shocked…she is still wid angel’s accident…n now armaan behaving like dis…wud break her..: armaan..???

Armaan: dis is all becuz of u…!!!!

Riddima: me???

Armaan: now dun b innocent riddhima…yes its becuz of u…!!!!

Riddhima: armaan yeh kya keh rahe ho….shez our angel..humaari beti hai..wat do u mean.???

Armaan: stop it riddhima…jst stop it….tum itni carelsessness…..

Riddhima: oh ok..jst cuz I dint infrm u abt getting angel..tum aisey keh rahe ho naa??

Armana: meiney itni baar usey awaaz di..ki slide par sey utar jaaye…but u…u toh were jst encouraging her…to play…lik dat..and u wre soo busy counting on me…ryt???

Riddhima: armaan utmhe kya ho gaya hai….?? Y r u behaving like dis….

Armaan: muhjey kya ho gaya hai??? Oh god..riddhima…tum..itni bewakoof toh nahi….ya phir..itni innocent bannti ho…huh??/

Ridhdima: armaan….

Armaan: haan…exactly….or is it tht…u bringin old memories bac…of being heartless…having no feeling..as u had once during those intrns days….???

Dis ws it…dis thing of bringin da old memories..when she had tortured him of not confessin…dat tym…he brought it up again….he knew…dis thing ws her weak point…she ws always guilty of tht..n she told him dat as well…n he knew dat wud jst hurt her…hurt her like a sword passing thru her heart…she remained silent….n then..

Riddihma: armaan…yeh..kya..??...kya…keh….

Armana: haan riddhima sach hi keh raha hu….tum badli hi nahi…tabsey….kehte hai naa..insaan chaahe kitni koshish karle…kahin na kahin..uska who pehlu..woh nature dikh hi jaata hai….. U R RESPONSIBLE FR MY CHILD….MY ANGELS ACCIDENT…U GET DAT…

Riddhima: armaan..plzzz….plzzz yeh mat kaho….not at dis tym…plzzz….

Armaan: riddhima….agar..meri angel ko kuch hua naa….and he jst point out his index finger at her….

She luks at him..so furious..but she ws jst not normal now…she too has had enuff today…..he luking sooo angrily at her…and she wid tears rolling dwn…..

He then…jst…trns his head…n moves out of da fire escape…elaving her all alone….she..now…alone..cold…falling dwn on her knees…crying…recollecting evry word dat armaan has told….she knows dat he doesn’t mean all dat..cuz hes jst angry now….but telling all dat at da moment…ws not da ryt tym….she cud not take all dat…all of it…..



And da part ends here guys…..HOPE U GUYS NJOID IT….will cum wid da next part…soon…



Karan-shilpa forever…as armaan-riddhima forever…





PART 7-

Aftr crying fr a long while..riddhima ws sooo weak tht she jst lay against da wall sitting on one of the step….when she dozed to sleep…she herself dint realize….suddenly when she woke up wid a jerk..as her head ws goin to fall ahead….and wid NO ONES support to hold her head…she opened her eyes…luked around…in search of…in search of ARMAAN…..expecting he wud have been around…and she cud not make out..fr how long she ws there in da fire escape..all ALONE….sooo worse ws fr her…to b alone…she had never imagined her life..widout armaan by her side….or angel..they both wre just her life..her heart..he soul..her everything….she luked at her watch…it ws 11.30 p.m…it had been….4 hours tht they brought angel to jeevan hospital….and da tym seemed to pass so slow..dat it luked ages fr her…..she quickly got up…wiping da tracks of tears tht left impressions on her cheeks….and hurriedly wlked out of there….fr armaan…and angel…..



HE….ws strolling…here n there…outside..angels patient ward….thinking whether to go in or not….cuz..he had not da courage to luk at his fairy…his ANGEL….in pain…and numb…and soo silent…he ws jst used to luk at her..always screaming…or playing…and evry 5 mins he ws around her..she wud definatley call out..” DADDY”…but now….he knew when he’d go in..there wud b no such call….in other 5 mins…nor in another….couple of hours….he ws just luking dwn…then smacked his side of da cheek wid his hand..then brushed his hair…and then luked up..and tuk a heavy sigh…and then..saw..riddhima cumin towards him….he then suddenly trned his face….and strted to walk to angels room…it ws as if…sight of riddhima gave him all da strength and courage to face his little riddhima….ofcourse there ws no denial..tht riddhima had always been his strength…his courage..and this tym tooo….evn though he ws mad at her….dis fact cudn b changed….

As he moved towards angel’s room…riddhima caught his hand….

Riddhima: armaan…??? Plzzz…..plzzz…

Armaan..jst shrugged his hand not tht hard..as b4…but slightly..jst to move her hand frm his…and walked in da room….followed by riddhima…..as they both entered da room….riddhima…suddenly luked at angel….

Angel…ws lying on da bed…quiet as evr….wid her tiny little hands to her sides….and taking her little breaths in and out..making her…swollen tummy move up n dwn….dat sight…made both armaan and riddhima smile….she ws jst an angel in their life….they both walked hteir way to her….both on their either sides…held her hand…and simultaneously both kissed her hand….it ws jst reflex action frm both of them…they both did exactly da same….not knowing…each others actions….aftr they did the same..they both luked at each other…and again not knowing their both actions…they both bent dwn simultaneously and kissed angel’s forehead…when they did this…close to angel’s forehead..armaan and ridhdima…caught their sight…locked into each others eyes….then both of them…jst broke their lock…by feeling something…it ws angel…who moved her forehead….she ws much better now….

Armaan had a tlk wid da doctor…DR SINHA….he thanked him…and apologized as well fr his behaviour…and dr sinha tuk dat very well….and told dat it ws very expected…fr a parent to behave like dat….

Armaan: dr…..sinha…hum angel ko sanjeevni mein shift karna chah rahe the…..the thing is not wid da service here….but its jst tht…I cnt b all da tym wid my daughter….and at sanjeevni…I have dat assurance…and satisfaction…

Dr sinha: I understand dat dr armaan mallik..but its preferable if angel stays here fr another 20 hours…jst under observation…undisturbed…u know it mr mallik…I dun have to xplain u….do i??

Armaan: hmm..no no..i understand as well…its ok…il stay here…and thanq once again…

Dr sinha: oh…my pleasure…do call me if required…

Armaan: yea certainly…

They both shake their hands….and armaan…goes bac to angel’s room…he had expected riddhima there…but did not find her….yet again..again she showed her carelessness..leaving angel alone….he uttered it inside…..but soon…he found a nurse in da room…he had not seen her..when he entered…she ws behind da curtain wall…she approached towards him…

Nurse: sir…ur wife had to go somewhere…n she asked me to stay here….do u need something..??

Armana: no..thanq..i will stay here by my daughter….its ok..

And she left….armaan..all tired...dint know…kab uski aankh lag gayi…and jst fell bac on da couch…his head sliding outwrd….

Soon..he felt…soft satin..on his face….and when he opened his eyes..it ws riddhima..standing in front of him….her hand brushing on his cheek….he woke up…at da sight of riddhima…as always he did…and then…second luk on his fairy….she ws sleeping..still…

Riddhima: armaan….

Armaan..jst luked da opposite direction riddhiam ws lukin…

Riddhima: armaan..mein jaanti hu…tum mujh par gussa ho..par plzzz yeh gussa apne aap par toh mat nikaalo./..chalo…its..already..midnite…and tumney kuch nahi khaaya..chalo khaana khaa lo…I got it fr u..

Armaan: mujhey bhookh nahi hai…he told dis in his stern …adamant voice..

But riddhima ws adamant tooo…..it ws always armaan..who cud get things out of riddhima..hsi way…but when ryt tym wud cum…it ws always..riddhima’s victory…and so ws dis tym…cuz she knew..she cud win…only when he ws emotionally broken….especially when it wsi n concern of her or angel…

Riddhima: chalo..utho…angel ko soney do…humaari awaaz usey distrb naa kare….we’ll b jst out of da room..nowhr far..

He got up..and obeyed to her instructions ….like a small child…

They both sat on da waiting chairs outside….armaan really tired now…but not hungry…cuz he had enuff to face thru out da day….n his hunger had died completely….he jst cudn feel…any hunger….though he ws empty-stomacch….riddhima..got a morcel of roti in her hand..to feed him…but armaan..jst showed his hand as if to stop her…..and jst stood…leaning bac to da wall….his bac facing her..

Armaan: riddhima…plz…muhey bhookh nahi…jab lagegi..tab khaa lunga..and I m in no mood to tlk to u…so plzz….

Riddhima…remained silent..cuz she knew it ws no use..to tlk..or strt wid an argument..cuz she did not want to happen anything in public…she jst sat there….thining…of da tym..when he n her…faced da same situation…at da tym..when minnie had a cancer attack….



Scene shifts….

Riddhima…woke up as da sun rays hit her face..and found armaan ws not ther…nor in angel’s room…

Armaan…had his cup of coffee in da canteen…and ws cumin wlking towards her….she had slept..but he hadn’t…so he went to have a cup of coffee..as he had work fr da following morning….and soo had to keep himself awake….he came towards her..shaking his head in jerks…to keep himself…awake…and alert…she noticed dis..

Riddhima: armaan…tum saari raat nahi soye naa???

Armaan: hum abhi angel ko ghar le jaa rahe hai….and he directly went in angel’s room…as he had cleared up wid all da formalities of da hospital…and all three of them left…

They reached home….it ws silent…armaan and ridhdima…hadn’t spoken a word…all da way…they laid angel in armaan-ridhdima’s bedroom..feleing more secured abt her….then..before goin to da washroom..to refreshen himself..to leave to sanjeevni..he jst trned twrds riddhima….and he broke da silence..

Armaan: TUM ISS BAAR TO ANGEL KAA THEEK SEY KHAYAAL RAKHOGI….SO I FEEL ASSURED….AND LEAVE???

These words hit hard on riddhima…she felt…da anger rising in her…wat did he mean by tht sarcasm…tht she cudn take care of her little princess….she did not utter a word…as she did not want to distrb angel’s sleep…..and angrily..she jst walked dwnstairs..to da kitchen…to make breakfast fr armaan….

As riddhima…set da whole table….she saw armaan..walk past her….towrds da main door….she jst brought her hand in front…

Riddhima: armaan…naashta….and he left….da dorr ws swaying to and fro….he had completely ignored her….she standing there alone…cursing da breakfast she made…as she cud not take out her frustration nywhere….



Angel had woken up..and wsm uch better now….as per armaan’s instructions….ridhdima had to bring angel to sanjeevni fr chek up…..but tht afternoon..anjali and atul and their son wre trning up….riddhima infrmed abt evrythnig….and anjali…told..they wud b cumin by eve 6 as atul had some appointments….

Riddhima took angel to sanjeevni….admitted angel in one of da rooms…and armaan came in..cheking her…

Armaan: hey…princess…hows my little fairy…today??

Angel..lying on bed wid lolu…: DADDY!!!!!.....mein toh hu fit n fine.aapki tarah….

And he kisses her on her forehead….riddhima sees all dis…their love…and is jst elated lukin at all dis…wat does she need more….?? Nothing??? But some way…she did feel left out….deprived….and she felt like estranged…..armaan..noticed dat…he noticed..and exactly knew wat ws goin in riddhima….

She left…both armaan and angel have a tlk fr a while….and went out…she feels a bit weak..and dizzy…

Armaan: hmm…soo..princess…when do we have wrestling next???

Angel: daddy…wow…now??

Armaan: now?? Oh nahi beta..abhi nahi…chocolate???

Angel: yeaaa……yipeee….then she luks around..in search of some1..

Armaan: kya dkeh rahi ho beta..???

Angel: mamma ko…woh kahan gayi..abhi toh thi naa….

Armaan: haan buttercup….woh baahar hi hai…chalo..abhi tum so jao…ok…and no shaitaani…

Angel: daddy..plzzz mamaa ko bulaayiye…I want to tell her solly…

Armaan: so jao…angel..mein mummy ko bahi bhejtah u..ok…she nodds her head….

Riddhima…jst cums in…

Angel: mamaa…..chocolate khaayegi??

Riddhima: ohh…aap khao…aur pooori mat khaana…u know it…

Angel: haan mamaa..i knw….and she strts nibbling at her chocolate….armaan has a luk at riddhima…and so does she….he wlks…bac to his duty…



Scene shifts…

Angel is sleeping in her room..and riddhima..walks out…towards armaan’s cabin….its 1.40 p.m….

Knock…knock…

Armaan: cum in..

Ridhdima: hmm..mein hu…

Armaan luks at her…..

Riddhima: lunch tym ho gaya hai…armaan…tumney kuch khaaya???

Armaan: nahi…bhookh nahi mujhey..

Riddhima: armaan….aisey kaisey bhookh nahi hai…u hadn’t had anything since yesterday…sirf ek coffee par ho…I know….kal shaam sey tumney kuch nahi khaaya…

Armaan: I had coffee here as well….im ok…its ok…tumhe abhi chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi….tum bas angel ke saath raho..thts more than enuff fr me…

Riddhiam: chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi??? Armaan kya ho gaya hai tumhe….plzz…b normal..mujhsey normal baat karo….plzzzz…

Armaan…had never behaved like dis wid riddhima..dis ws da frst tym…n ofcourse…angel ka frst accident tha…toh he tuk it very sensitively….

Armaan gets a call…

Armaan: excuse me!!! And he gets engaged wid da call…

Riddhima…feels…like some1 spanking her….she quietly left his room…and armaan saw her leaving frm da conrners of his eye…..

He ws speaking to anjali….

Anjali: hey armaan….hows angel???

Armaan: haan…shez fine…..not to worry…

Anjali: hmm….is everything fine??? Between u n ridhdima..ya phirk oi jhagda kiya??

Armana: naa…nahi..woh toh bus yuhi….you know it…chalta rehta hai…

Anjali: I know armaan….but plzz….usey akela mat chadhna…I had a ltk wid her….she ws sounding very low…who kabhi kisi ko kuch nahi kahegi…u kno it..

Armaan: hmm….

Armaan..knew evry wrd she ws saying..infct he knew her…more than herself…..

Armana: toh tum log ka baa rahe ho??

Anjali: well..atul kit oh kuch duty hai..toh hum log..shaam mein hi aayengey….ok…so c u at home…bye…

Armaan: haan..yea..chalo then…bye…

As he hung up da phone….da ward boy came runnig to armaan…..

Ward boy: sir….!!! Sir…woohh…woh…madam..waha…baahaar…

Armaan: kya hua riddhima ko..?? he gets up frm his chair..at instant….in a jerk…trembling his chair n desk….

Ward boy: sir..woh baahar…lobby mein behosh ho gayi….

Armaan….now wid complete terror in his face…..da only thing dat struck his mind was….” Riddhima…ne pakka kuch nahi khaaya kal sey..i know her…”….and he jst runs…forgetting evrythnig…aside….as fast he cud..towrds his life….his love…his heart…his soul….RIDDHIMA….



AND SO GUYS..DIS PART ENDS HERE….WUD CONTINUE DA REST IN DA NEXT PART…..HOPE U GUYS NJOIED IT….



Karan-shilpa forever…as armaan-riddhima forever…





PART 8-



Armaan ran as fast as he cud….n reached da lobby where riddhima fainted….the ward boys n nurses wre…goin to help her…pick her…but armaan…widout any pause..jst went to her….

Armana huffing n puffing..running out of breath : RIDDHIMA…??? Riddhima….tum sun rhai ho naaa mujhey…riddhuima…??? Aankh kholo…and he hits her slightly on her face….

Riddhima..opens her eyes….how cud she not aftr listening to his voice….as she ws jst dying to hear him…listen him tlk …his voice…

Riddhima: h..huu..huh….ar..armaan…and she holds his face wid her one hand….trembling…wid weakness…

Armaan: oh god..riddhima…thank god….and he suddenly…picks her up in his arms..and directly takes her to da in-patients room…and while holding her on his way to da room..he tells one of da nurse’s “nurse mere jitney bhi appointments…agley do ghantey ke hai….plzz..unhe adjust kar le…mein nahi kar paunga…apni duty…fr another hour or 2….plz dr karan ko infrm kar dey…so dat he assigns few interns…”

Wardboy: ji sir…ji dr armaan…

Armaan..takes his riddhima to da room….lays her on da bed…riddhima..still unconscious..she wants to tlk..to move…but due to her weakness she isn’t able to..and so she ws kinda trembling..or shivering…

Armana: nurse….glucose ki bottle laana…and he injects da needle(syringe) in her vein….he feeling all da pain..though she ws weak…but he cud feel her pain…her numbness…and then he attached da needle tube to da glucose pack….dta ws dao nly way to revive her…energy…cuz she ws at da moment not in da condition of eating nything…

Half an hour had passed….and riddhima..wakes up…still feeling dizzy….and she does not find armaan around….she cud not remember…wat had happened when she fell…as it wsl iek a black out fr her….she cud not evn remember who got her to da ward….but not finding armaan in da room..or near..she thought tht armaan wudnt have got her….he wudnt have bothered???? This thing ws hurting her…” had I dun something sooo bad tht armaan’s totally boycotting me…??? Do I deserve dis??? Dis is all goin in her mind…wid her sad xpression….tears almost lined in her eyes….and a heavy lump in her throat….depressed soo much….she did not notice…some1 cumi n her room….who ws….ARMAAN…and he ws noticing her thinking deep like dis….to which he instantly replies…

Armaan: no….ITS NOT UR FAULT….AND U DUN DESERVE DIS…

Riddhima luks up..shocked….frst to find when did he enter da room..and secondly…da answer her gave to da question she ws jst thinking in her mind….DAMN…he knew her sooo well….evry core of her….he jst knew it…

Riddhima: armaan…

Armaan: riddhima..bas baat mat karo….but jst answer me one thing…. Kal sey tumney kuch khaaya ya nahi???

Riddhima..makes da face of a child….hesitatiing to answer…..to which armaan gets angry….but cnt show it much…

Armaan: bolo riddhima…did u or did u not??/

Riddhima: nahi….no..

Armana: wat??? U did not…tumney kal sey kuch nahi khaaya??? Wat da hell is dis riddhima….kyun nahi khaaya tumney….???

Riddhima: armaan…tumney bhi toh kuch nahi khaaya tha…kal sey….aur..tumhe itne tension mein dekhkar..mein kaisey khaati..and u know..it…I have always had my food wid u…

Armaan…now felt dat he ws to b cursed….he felt…dat he had..exceeded wid his behaviour…and ws cursing himself within…cz he never meant to hurt his love..like dis….not physically….never…ever…n dis tym…riddhima ws hurt…physically….he agrees tht choti moti ladaayi chalti rehti hai….par ridhdima had never caused harm to herself like dis….and he hated..when riddhima..or angel wre hurt like dis….

Armana: ridhdima….tum bhi…choti bachchi ho kya??? Khaana khilaana padega kya??

Riddhima: hmm….kabhi tumney khilaayaa???

And armaan…smiles at dis…and gets something to eat…and he feeds her….but b4 he feeds…she feeds him..cuz she too knew dat he too hadn’t had anything since yesterday…they both feed each other..n then..

Riddhima: im sorry armaan….

Armana: im sorry..riddhima…mein jaanta hu..iss baar kuch zaada hi ho gaya….im sorry jaan….

Riddhima: I know armaan..mein tumhe jaanti hu….aur tum…humaari beti ke liye hi toh naraaz hue the…

Armaan: riddhima….plzzz mujhey ghalath mat samajhna…shona….i mean..wat all I told u….saari puraani baatein dohraaney ke liye..

Riddhima…was again hurt at dis….she jst hugs armaan….and strts crying..

Armana: im sorry honey..im really sorry…mein sirf gussey mein tha…samajh nahi aa raha tha..ki angel ki iss haalath ka frustration kaisey nikaalu..and tum hi toh ho…hamesha sey..meri stress buster….i dint mean nything I told u….i jst luv u….

Riddhima cries fr a while..and armaan..lets her cry..so dat she cud remove all her griefs and make herself a lil light…

Riddhima: mein jaanti hu..armaan….i know it…

Armaan: bas riddhima…hamesha aisey rehna….kabhi meri kisi baat ko serious mat le lena….plzzz jaan….warna mein tooot jaunga….mar jaunga..

Riddhima: armaan….shut up…

He wipes his tears…..and then..to enliven da atmosphere…

Armana: waisey..mrs mallik…rotey hue bhi kya sexy….lagti hai….!!!! And he winks at her…

Riddhima smiles….: achcha…!!!!

Armana: haan…aur….mrs mallik key eh hoth(lips)….hmm…jee karta hai….ki…and he cums forward..to kiss her..

Riddhima: armaan….!!! Yeh hospital hai….and yaad rakho..tum yaha..senior doctor ho..infct…HEAD…ho….sooo mr armaan mallik….beware…

Armaan: ohhh god….basket…kuch toh romantic raho….god…lagta hai..mujhey tumhe sab phir sey shuru sey sikhaana hoga….

Ridhdima: armaan!!!! Shut up….hmmm…aura b angel kaisi hai..??

Armana: haan ab theek hai….abhi tho so rahi hogi….riddhima..i jst cnt imagine my life widout u and angel….tum dono mein sey kisi ko bhi kuch bhi ho…yeh mein soch bhi nahi sakta..isliye shaayad…kal jab angel ka yeh accident hua..toh mujhey react kaisey karna tha..woh samajh nahi aaya….im sorry jaanaa…once again..

Ridhdima: ab phir sey rulaana ka iraada hai kya??

Armana: tum jo mujhey itne saal sey rulaate aa rahi ho….meri reena teena meena..toh atleast mujhey aisey roney nahi deti…

Riddhima: haan haan..toh phir jao naa..apni reena teena meena ke paas…

Armana: haan haan..jaunga naa…unh etym bhi dekar aaya hai…par thodi der yaha bhi toh….apna tym deduuu…and he hugs her…and then kisses her on her cheek…

Armaan: arey riddhima…anji and atul…and om…aaney waley hai..naa 6pm tak..

Riddhima: arey haan…I think armaan….mujhey and angel ko ab ghar jaana chahiye..tum plzzzz formalities purey kardo..and we’l leave…

Armana: haan ok…u will leave..par listen..u r not doin ny work at home….na hi tum kuch dinner banaaogi…we’ll go out tonite…fr dinner…and uske baad…kaafi masti…and he winks at riddhima..naughtily..

Riddhima: haan armaan…ok…babaa…I wont do ny work…par raat ko ghar waapas jaldi aa jayenge…cuz om and angel…dono ko jaldi sulaana hoga..

Armana: arey tum uski fikar mat karo….il manage dat jaana..chalo..il wind up wid all da formalities….tab tak..tum yaha sey nahi hil rahi ho…till I cum bac…mein aaney ke baad hi….tumhe…car tak chodunga…ok???

Riddhima: par armaan..mein ab theek….

Armana: riddhima…bas…I told u…baat khatam…

Ridhdima: ok..babaaa…im waiting...achcha sunio..mujhey angel ke paas toh le jao jab tak..mein uske saath rahungi…meri angel ko itne tym sey nahi dekha…

Armaan: haan sweetie…chalo…



Hey guys….dis part ends here…and I m closing up wid love story 2020…fr now….cuz I want to cum up wid some new idea….and I have some new script in mind…which id post in soon….something…diffrnt..something fresh….

And hope u guys…liked dis part….and liked dis LOVE STORY 2020…..cuz I wont write more on dis now….



Well c u soon..wid something new n fresh..till then…AND PPL..PLZ DO COMMENT AND RATE HOW U FOUND LOVE STORY 2020 AS OVERALL...



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