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Old 01-15-2009, 12:17 AM   #1
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Default Love Story 2020 ....PART 6...

HEY GUYS…HERE I AM WID LOVE STORY 2020 PART 6…WID SO GUD RESPONSE FRM U GUYS…THANX FR IT YAAR….HERE ITS IS..PART 6 FOLLOWED BY PART 4 AND PART 5…FOR UR GUYS FOLLOW UP…



hey...ppl....dis is fr ppl reading fr da frst tym...i cn jst tell tht da story till now is dat..armaan and riddhima are married and they have a luvly daughter named ANGEL....


Hey guys…dis is part 4…followed by PART 5….

And ppl im really really sorry fr such a delay 4 dis post….



Part 4-



Ok so here it goes….

Angel: chalo..mamaa….jaldi chalo…I don’t want to b late to da park..warna…who rohit gol-gol swing (she means to say merry-go-round…lol…) mein meri jagah le lega….chalo mamaa…

Riddhima is packing few sandwiches in her basket….as they r jst goin fr a walk to the park…and she knows angel wud soon feel hungry….

Angel: oh god mamaa….daddy bhi itni der nahi lagaatey…and who correct kehte hai aapke bare mein…

Riddhima: correct…kya kehte hai tumhaare daddy..???

Angel: ki yeh madam….ko toh 1 day bhi bas nahi tayyar hone mein…

Riddhima: kya??? Tumhaare daddy ne aisa kaha..

And angel chuckles….heheheeh…well they both r set to go to da park….and its tym fr armaan to cum bac frm sanjeevni….so b4 leaving riddhima gives a call to armaan…incase if he cud join at da park….

Tring…tring….tring tring…

Armaan: hello…sweetheart….

Riddhima: hi…achcha suno…kab taka a rahe ho ghar??

Armaan: hmm..bas nikal hi raha tha….kyun??? missin me..??

Riddhima: no…not missing u…

Armaan: chalo ahccha hai….ab itne saarey ladkiya mujhey miss karegi toh mein kin kin ko tym dunga….toh phir mein…shilpa ke paas chale hi jaata hu..shez missing me like hell….n me too missin my shilpa….

Riddhima: armaan..!!!! tumhe kehna tha..ki mein aur angel…central park jaa rahe hai….tum waha join karlogey??/

Armaan: haan jaan….aur meri choti sii janaa ko meri taraf sey kiss dena…

Riddhima: aur mein???

Armaan: haan..tumhaari kiss toh mein hi dunga naa…he says this in a naughty tone…

Angel: haan daddy….warna..mein aapki kiss mamma ko dedu….(ACTUALLY ANGEL WS LISTENING TO THEIR CONVERSATION FRM A PARALLEL LINE….FRM DA BEDROOM CONNECTION…..LOL….AND SO SHE INTERRUPTS SAYIN DIS….)

Riddhima…is sooo damn embarrassed…hearing angel on da other line….and armaan..cud make out frm riddhima’s silence…dat she is embaraased…and also blushing within..so to make riddhima comfortable….he jst diverts da topic….tlkin to angel…

Armaan: ohh…mera jaaannaa….mera bahchca ..angel kaisa hai???

Angel: daddy..mein toh bilkul fit n fine….aap park aa rahe hai??

Armaan: haan beta…I will…par park nahi…basketball court…wat say meri pari???

Angel: basketball!!!! Wowo…haan haan daddy..park ke baad basketball court…mama…dekhiye we will go to basketball court aftr da park..i want to play wid daddy…

Riddhima: ok beta…ab chalo….phone rakho…mama ko daddy sey kuch important baat karni hai..chalo..tum jao apna lolu lekar aao..phir hum niklte hai..ok??

Angel: ok mama….ok daddy….love u daddy…muah…bye..

Armaan: luv u too meri jaanaa….bye..

Angel hangs da phone…

Armana: haan..kya hua riddhima….chehre ka rang laaal…sey normal hua?? And he laughs..

Riddhima: hmm…par tumhaara toh favorite colour hai naa laal….

Armaan: hmm…woh toh mein tumhare chehre ka colour laal…chutki tym mein kar sakta hu…bas..aa toh jau mein…

Riddhima: armaan…!!! Ahchca..tum ghar aaakr…fresh hokar..sandwiches khaakar aana..meiney sandwiches tumhaari…fridge mien rkahi hai…kha lena…uske bina…u r not goin to step out of da house..samjhey???

Armaan: jo hokum sarkaar…

Riddhima: theek hai…chalo phir…c u at da court…at 6…

Armaan: hmm…suno…

Riddhima: haan..

Armana: kcuh kahogi nahi..

Riddhima..knows wat armaan wants to listen..but she pretends of not understanding..

Armaan: oh god riddhima…iss maamle mein toh angel tumsey kitni tez hai…

Riddhima: I love u armaan….and she blushes…

Armaan: love u tooo jaan…muah…

They both hang up….but riddhima…is jst standing there…holding her phone against her chest….and jst lost in their both memories….and still smiling..n blushing…thinking of da tym of their confession….so much she luved him…n so much he luved her…jst then…

Something pulls riddhima’s frock….lol..its angel….riddhima is wearing a frilled frock…of beautiful colours which armaan had presented her recently…

Angel: come on mommy…jaldi chalo…

Riddhima: haan beta..chalo….



They both go to da park…angel plays wid other lil kids..and riddhima…tlks to some ladies….watching their kids play….its almost 6pm….and angel cums running huffing and puffing towards riddhima…

Angel: mamaa….huhu…huhu….chalo….daddy ke paas jana hai…huh…huh..

Riddhima: angel beta…ruko…dekho…itna bhaag kar aayi ho…saas toh theek seey lo beta…ruko..aaraam sey jaayenge….

Angel: nahi mamaa….abhi chalo….jaldi…plzzzz naa...

Riddhima: theek hai beta..chalo…

And they both walk fr da basketball court…armaan has reached there b4 tym….

Angel: daddy!!!!!! And she runs towards armaan..to hug him…

Armaan..trns n luks at 2 beautiful riddhimas of his life..and stretches his hands..to invite fr a hug….and angel…hugs him..and armaan..luks at riddhima…and gives a sign of kiss…and winks at her….riddhima..then goes to da spectators place…and sits there….while armaan….their angel..and some lil boys r playing….

In a while..angel and a lil boy…fight on some issue…and tab hi..da ball cumz dribbling towards angel n dat lil boy…angel then..jst pushes da lil boy hard..grabs da ball….and screams..outl oud…

Angel: daddy!!!!!

Then armaan…lifts her high…and she…makes da basket…. …lol….

And then angel goes towards da lil boy…luks tuff at him..n say” phir sey nahi kehna ki gals basketball nahi keh sakti…kyunki mein toh bahut ahchca khelti hu…aur meri mommy bhi….”…she gives him a look..making him al il scared…

Armaan and riddhima..watch all dis…and laugh…lukin at each other..da way..their lil angel is…

Armaan: bilkul…tum par gayi hai riddhima….gussa bhi…aur basketball khelna bhi…aur aisey..ladko ko daraana bhi..

Riddhima: shut up armaan….aur waisey bhi meri beti hai..toh mujh par toh jaayegi hi…

Armaan: wat do u mean…tumhaari beti hai….??? Who meri bhi toh beti hai..toh who mujh par gayi hai zaada…

Riddhima: mujh par…!!!

Armaan: nahi…mujh par..

Riddhima: mujh par…

Armaan: riddhima…mujh par…

And then angel cums in between….

Angel: phir sey???...mommy..daddy..aap log..hamesha kyun ladte ho…???

Riddhima and armaan then…laugh at it….



Well guys..dats it fr dis part….

Hope u guys njoid reading it….



Karan-shilpa forever…as armaan-riddhima forever…





PART 5-



Armaan ..riddhima..and angel wre in da basketball court….and it ws tym fr them to leave….

Riddhima: chalo…angel beta..bahut khel liya…aur dekho…ab ghar jaakar..bathie-bathie..khelengey ..ok…??

Angel: mama…bubbles ke saath….plzzz…..??? and angel clips her hands and bends a little in front of riddhima..requesting fr a bubble bath….

Armaan: lifts angel on his shoulder….: haan beta…ofcourse..bubbles ke sath..bath hoga..aur daddy bhi tho saath hongey naa…and he winks at angel….

Angel: yeeeeee…….wooopieeee….and armaan and angel both give hi-5 to each other…..

They make their way out of da court….and angel forces them to go bac home by walk…as she gets da chance to c many cute puppies and dogs out on walks as well…..and luking at a few dogs..wid their masters….she says..

Angel: daddy….hum bhi…fluffy ko aisey hi laayengey….ok..??

Armaan: FLUFFY??? Yeh kya hai beta??

Angel: hawww…aapko fluffy nahi malum daddy….mamma ko toh pata hai….mama ne aapko bataaya nahi…

Armaan: nahi….dekho tumhaari mamaam ujhsey kitni saari baatein chupaati hai….abhi sey…(he says dis in a lower tone…to angel…) and they both giggle at dis conversation….

Riddhima: haan..kya ho raha hai?? Kya khusar-phusar ho rahi hai.?? Zarooor mere bare mien hoga….

Angel: nahi mama….hum toh fluffy ke bare mien baat kar rahe the…toh haan daddy…fluffy humaare puppy ka naam hoga…aur kab aaney wala hai fluffy….??

Armaan: bahut jaldi beta….my buttercup…and he brushes angel’s nose…and moves forward bringing his cheek in front…indicating dat angel kisses him….and so she does….

Angel: daddy….mujhey who pink ballon chahiye….badaa walaa..

Riddhima: angel!!!! Beta…yeh koi tareeka hai koi cheez maangne kaa??? Is dis da way u ask fr something..??? it luks more of a demand than request….

Armaan: oh come on riddhima….and riddhima cuts him off…

Riddhima: armaan….chup raho…these are basic manners..aaj hum sey aisey maang rahi hai..kal kisi ghair sey aisey maangeygi…n I wud never want my child to b like dis in front of others….

And armaan as ususla remains quiet when it cums to matters like dis….lol…..

Riddhima: angel…u will not get da ballon until u ask da right way baby….

Angel: ok mamaa….solly…daddy…kya mujhey aap who ballon dilaaogey…who pink wala….woh sabsey bada walaa….is dis ok mamaa….ya aur bolu??? And then she luks at armaan naughtily…as she says dis in a way to tease her mommy….lol..

Armaan smiles at dis…cuz he knows dis is da quality which angel has inherited frm him…da way to convince….and get wht one wats…lol…

Riddhima: aur bolu??? Iska kya matlab hai angel…armaan…armaan tumhi ney yeh sab sikhaaya hai naa angel ko…and she luks at armaan….and armaan moves..bac…wid his hands in front kind of defending himself..lol..

Angel: no mama…daddy ne kuch nahi kiya….oh plzzz mamaa….ab plzzz balloon dila do naa…

Armaan: haan buttercup…chalo…

They get da ballon fr angel…..and angel is busy playing wid it….each tym…thrusting it high in air…and then running to catch it….and meanwhile armaan and riddhima are up wid their conversation….



Armaan: hmm…so mrs mallik..aaj ka din kaisa tha???

Riddhima: hmm…achcha tha…achcha suno armaan..kal dii and atul aaney waley hai….fr a day’s stay..tumhe yaad hai naa??

Armaan: ohh..mein toh bhool hi gaya tha jaan..well ahchca hua tumney yaad dila diya..il cum home early tom….kab taka a rahe hai??

Riddhima: hmm..they’d b cumin at lunch tym…around…1 ..i think…

Armaan: hmm…he thinks fr a while…as if jst recollectin all da appointments n surgeries he has next day..and then says..” hmm…ok…gud..il b home by 2…”

Riddhima: theek hai…aur jaldi aa sakte ho ..toh aa jao….

Armaan: haan jaanaa….hmmm…well riddhima mein soch raha hu..agar tum nahi hoti..toh mera aisey tym management kaisey hota….kasiey sab kuch yaad rkahta…

Riddhima: wat do u mean..ki mein tumhaari schedule planner hu?? And she gives an irritatedl uk at him…

Armaan: hmmm….jo tum samjho…

Riddhima: armaan..!!!!!

They both r just into their conversation..and a point came..tht they do luk at angel…but aftr much…awaited tym…not tht regularly…

Armaan slowly holds riddhima’s hands…and riddhima blushes da same….as b4…they both still luked…sooo young…such a fresh couple..hardly ny1 cud make out tht they wre married….and havin a kid…ws way far…lol…they luked..like a young couple..jst like a frsh boyfriend-girlfrend…lol…dis cud b made out..as all da young gals luking at them..jst pass few comments..n kinda give…envious luks to riddhima…and they also over-hear thm sayin…things like…”who ladka pakka..st.xaviers ka hoga….and luk at her…lucky she…wonder kausey university ki hogi…”…..”hey hey..luk at her boyfriend..hes sooo cute…hmm…shez pretty as well yaar…both luk soo cute..hope they get married…”..and when tthey both hear such comments..they boh jst giggle over it….and riddhima and armaan…both wudn say it out loud..both dono andar hi andar….yeh zaroor kehti hai ..ki…” humaari jodi ko kisi ki nazar naa lagey..bhagwaan…always keep us happy like dis…togheter…and forever…”….and then both luk at each other..knowing wat both have jst asked fr..to god..and then smile….



Armaan: I love u riddhima..and kisses her hand…

Riddhima..luks at him….and jst closes her eyes fr a sec and then opens then..giving an indication dat she too luvs him…and he understood dat….he knows dat riddhima…doesn’t keep telling him how much she luvs him as he does….cuz she luvs him..he knows dat…and her eyes and actions jst speak out…whch he jst makes it out….

Armaan..then takes her hand…and places it near his chest…and takes a deep sigh…and then luks high up in da sky….and then..luks dwn…n walks a few paces….riddhima notices this…..she makes out..tht armaan…is thinking something…but wat???

Riddhima: armaan..??? sab theek toh hai..kya hua??

Armaan: kuch nahi jaanaa…bas…hospital ka stress…thak gaya hu bas..

Riddhima: armaan…tum kaho toh..mein tumhe join..

Armana: nahi riddhima…no…tumhaari zaroorat sanjeevni sey zaada…angel ko hai…

Riddhima: par armaan….tumm….toh…

Armana: riddhima…plzzz….

Riddhima…doesn’t like da way he cuts her out..and she does not luk at him…and luks at front….stiffly..

Armaan: ohh..jaanaa….sorry …par…riddhima…

Riddhima…stil does not luk at him…cuz shez totally freaked out now..cuz hes stressing himself sooo much at da hospital..n not evn allowing her to join…

Armaan: riddhima….angel…hum dono ki beti hai..aurm ien nahi chahta ki kisi bhi tarah angel neglect ho…ya aisa kuch usey ehsaas ho jaisey mujhey hota tha…jab mein chota tha….

As armaan says this…riddhima luks at him….touched…cuz she knows..dat armaan saying dis..is completely hurt….as he does not want to ever…recollecth is childhood memories….as they wre not as gud…as far as parents luv ws concerned….

Riddhima: ar..armaan….im sorry…

Armaan: riddhima/..tum kyun sorry bol rhai ho jaan….mere liye itna hi kaafi hoga…agar..tum samajh sako..ki..

Riddhima: mein samajhti hu armaan…sab kuch…tumhare har baat ka ehsaas hai mujey…par..jaanu..plzz tum apnak hayal rkaho..itna stress mat lo…koi assistant rakh lo..ya koi extra doctors rakh lo….koi badi baat nahi hogi..i jst dun wanna c u like dis anymore…warna theek nahi hoga…plzzz jaanu..

Armaan: ok..honey…as u say…hmm…toh assistant rkah lu???

Riddhima: haan..rakh lo..plzzz…

Armaan say in a naughty tone: hmmm..phir baad mien kehna nahi..ki meiney tumhe warna nahi kiya tha….ya infrm nahi kiya….hai meri nazar mein kuch sexiiii assistants…

Riddhima: armaan….!!!!!..theen hai…rakh lo…and she folds her hands and trns her bac to him…

Armaan hold her frm behind…resting his head on her shoulders…..: hmm….woh chodho…aur yeh batao…meri sexxxiiii life assistant kaisi hai (he means her)…??? And they both kinda move like a pendulum bob….he resting on her shoulders frm behind..and she trned wid her bac to him…folding her hands…

Riddhima: hmm…asisistant..toh hai bahut hi sexxxiii…..

Armaan: achcha…..toh dkehte hai phir……pata chal jaayega..aaj..

Riddhima: kya pata chal jaayega..and she trns towards him….

And armaan….and riddhima…jst luk at each other….and he jst gives a sign of kissing her …..and she…hits him slightly on his cheeks…and kinda runs frm ther….getting out of his grip….WELL GUYS..THIS ALL IS NOT HAPPENING IN PUBLIC….ITS SOMWHER..WHERE THERE IS NO1 AROUND….AS IT IS DUSK TYM….

She sruns out of his grip..and he keeps following her…..and suddenly he has his grip bas at hier….and dis tym…tight….

Rioddhima: armaan…chodho….

Armaan: ahaa…

Riddhima: armaan….angel…dekh legi..aur phir stupid sey sawaal karne lagegi….

Armaan: achcha???

Riddhima: haan…u know kal hi usney kya pucha..??

Armaan not leaving her…frm his tight grip..: kya pucha…??

Riddhima: she went like…mamaaa…daddy hamesha…kitchen mein aapko apni god mein kyu uthaate hai???

Armaan: ahchca??? She asked this??

Riddhima: aur toh aur armaan…usney pucha..ki mamaa…boys bhi lipstick lagaate hai kya??

Armaan: boys??? Aur lipstick…yeh kaisey puch liya usney..

Riddhima: suno toh….toh phir meine kaha..nahi beta…then she went like..toh phir daddy kyun hamesha lagaate hai..jab bhi..woh room sey aatey hai…??

Armaan burst out laughing listeinig to dis….kids r sooo innocent..they jst dunno anything..n so easily ask things like dis…widout any embarrassment….luking at armaan…ridhdima tooo strted to laugh….

Armaan: ohh god..riddhima…

Riddhima: wohi toh armaan..mujhey itna darr lagta hai…jiss tarah ke sawaal angel puchti hai…kahin baahar..jaakar humaare bare mien apna muh naak hol de…tum toh jaante hi ho..kaisi hai woh..jab tak apne sawaalo ke jawaab na mile…bas kisi tarah nikaal leti hai….sachi tum par hi gayi hai…

And they both jst laugh tlking abt their lil angel….when suddenly….they both hear some chaos….and confusion in da street…they jst hurry..so tht they get angel n move out frm there…..

They both are out of sight of angel…they both cnt find her..

Riddhima: angel…??? Angel…beta….

Armaan.: angel…..buttercup…whr r u???

They both r now worried cuz..thers no answer frm angel…n she had to b somewhr near…cuz she cnt go tht far…as armaan and ridhdima..wre also..wlking….but they did this big mistake..ofn ot keeping an eye on her….constantly…

Riddhima: armaan…mujhey fikar ho rahi hai..humaari beti kaha hai..angel kahan hai???

Armaan: ridhdima..ruko..tum fikar mat karo..yahi kahi hogi..kisi sey baat kar rahi hogi….

Riddhima: nahi armaan…..angel aisey kisi sey baat nahi karti….i have always kept her warning of not tlking to da strangers…..she wont disobey like dis….armaan..muhjey meri beti chahiye..jaldi..i want da sight of her..

Armaan : riddhima..equally evn I do…wait…let me luk there….he moves towards whre da chaos is goin….

and so does riddhima go behind him….

They both over-hear frm a person…wlaking by..as they move towards da chaos…..

Strnger: array yaar..waha ek accident hua hai….aur uss choti bachchi ko koi lene bhi nahi aaya..abhi tak…

Hearing this..armaan..and riddhima…both r jst shocked…jst by hearing this…they r jst cold now….and stnd still….they both r praying inside..tht wat they r jst thinking shud not trn out to b true….now both r still…dun evn have da courage to move a step ahead….armaan…some how…takes some courage n moves ahead….but riddhima…she has got such a big lump stuck in her throat tht she cud hardly swallow….her head feeling soo heavy all of a sudden….andshe uttering wrds…” no….god..no….plzzz..no….god…..no…no….no…..no..” she waits there….so dat armaan…has a luk at da girl…and assures her..dat its not wat they wre thinking….but then..armaan..trn his luk aftr having al uk at da girl….and luks at riddima……AND DA PART ENDS HERE…..



Guys….hope u njoid…il continue da rest…in da next part…..



Karan-shilpa forever…as armaan-riddhima forever…






[b]PART 6-[/B]



Armaan luks at riddhima…wid tears building up in his eyes..riddhima…jst luks at dat..and world cums to a halt fr her….” Y is armaan crying???”…..she thinks this in her mind….as to not accept da wrost thing..which she neither wants to hear…..armaan cums wlaking towards her…and she moves behind..as if to run away frm dat worst news..she does not want to hear it…she does not want to admit it…accept it….she keeps moving her paces…behind..slowly as he keeps cumin forward towards her….she moves nodding her head…saying..” no…no…no way armaan….u r not goin to utter a word….no…”….

Armaan hold her arms tight…bringing her close to him..: riddhima!!!!! Riddhima.!!!!..listen to me….

Riddhima: no….no armaan…

Armaan: riddhima….its not angel…!!!!

Listening dis…she pays no attention frst…and then…when she realizes…n cums bac to normal…she ws sooo much carried by da pain thinking dat it ws angel..now it becums difficult fr her to accept dat its not angel……but then aftr a while…tears burst out…and she falls hard on armaan’s chest….happy…n broken as well..thinking dat god has been sooo generous dat it ws not angel…and she also thinking dat if it wud have been angel..she wud b completely shattered…..jst the thot of it..ws killing her…and she crying hard…on armaan…evn armaan cud not control it..and soo tears rolled thru his cheeks as well..thankin god..dat it ws not angel…..but he had to behave strong then…to hold riddhima…and most important of dat ws….” Where ws angel???”



Armaan: riddhima….yeh tym roney ka nahi hai….humey toh khush hona chahiye tht it ws not angel..woh koi dusri choti ladki thi..and uske father usey waha lene aa gaye the..jab mein waha gaya….riddhima..stop crying….

Riddhima: controls her all emotions then….: hmmm…..par phir..angel kahan hai???

Armaan: wohi…mein dekhta hu…tum yehi rukna..plzz…kahin mat jaana….ok???

Riddhima: ok…

And so armaan goes towards da ice-cream man…inquiring abt angel….its been..15m inutes…since armaan has gone…and angel not yet wid her…riddhima becomes restless like hell now….she cnt take it nymore…and soo she too gets up..in search of angel…jst foregetting armaan’s words…as if he never told her to wait….

Jst as she moves..in da opposite direction..wher armaan had gone..n is disappeared…armaan cums in….and finds tht riddhima too is missing….now…dis agitates armaan….as hes frustrated not finding angel..and riddhima also not in place…tohugh he warned her to b there…..he gets frustrated tht now he has to luk fr riddhima as well….he becomes really angry on riddhima now….

Now armaan also goes da direction where riddhima had gone….he wlks a while n moves towards da sandpit…and he is shocked n surprised by wat he sees there…..he sees there..riddhima and angel..together…and angelplaying…on da slide….he gets furious…adding more to his anger…and walks towards riddhima..

Armana: RIDDHIMA!!!!

Riddhima..trns bac….

Armaan: wat da hell is dis??

Riddhima….had totally forgotten to infrm armaan dat she had found angel in da sandpit..but it ws not her fault as well….da moment she saw angel..she jst hugged her….and jst forgot dat armaan ws in search of angel as well…..wen she saw him cumin towards her..she came bac to normal….and felt guilty of not infrming him…

Riddhima: oh..armaan….jab tum gaye..meiney kaafi der tak intezaark iya..mujhsey raha nahi gaya..aur mein yaahaa dekhne aa gayi..n found angel here…

Armaan: and u were least bothered to infrm me…thers something called mobile??? U know how restless ws I as well..???

Angel: ohh mama..daddy..cum here..we’l play together..plzz..(angel says dis..as she deos not know how much confusion n horror she ALONE had brought to her parents….and armaan and ridhdima did not make her feel dat till now….)

Armaan really agitated now : ANGEL.!!!!! Jst cum dwn frm dat slide…its quite high..n its not fr u….neeche aao…abhi…

Riddhiam jst cuts him…

Riddhima: armaan..plzzz iss baat sey khush ho ki who humein mili hai.... sahi salaamat..aisey gussey mein mat aao…im sorry…im sorry…

Armaan…: riddhima…she is my daughter as well…he says this grinding his teeth…and riddhima finds out how angry he is at da moment wid her….

Armaan: jst cum dwn angel!!!!

Riddhima: armaan…let her play..fr a while..til we have a tlk….plzzzz…

Armaan: enuff of our tlk…we better go home now….i jst want to c angel....safe at home..at dis moment..i think..its enuff I had da whole day…at hospital.then wid dat gal’s accident..n ur CARELESSNESS….and..

Riddhima: carelessness??? Armaan…cum on…u cnt blame me on dis completely…I said im sorry ….par armaan…mein bhi kya karti…angel ko dkehte hi..mein sab bhool gayi…I jst ws lost wid her…

Armaan: bhool gayi?? How cud u riddhima?? How cud u b soo careless….??? Or is it tht u …..and he paused….thinking whter to say or not…

Riddhima: tht i…..wat???...wat armaan??? Speak up…

Armaan….jst diverting….shoutsl oud at angel now..: ANGEL….HOW MANY TYMS DO I TELL U TO GET OUT OF DAT MONSTER…???

Angel gets scared…by armaan loud voice..and jst shivers….thinking y her..best daddy is behaving like dis….like a MONSTER….

Riddhima: stop it armaan!!!! Dun take ur frustration out on angel..if she wants to play then let her….u dare do dat….mujh par gussa ho…toh mujh par nikaalo..not on her…



Armaan: riddhima…listen…he moves towards her and than..suddenly….

“AHHHH……” n they both hear..a thud sound….a big one….

Armaan and riddhima…both trn…n luk….da horror….angel all lying on da ground…angel…lost her balance..when armaan’s voice came like a monster…she jst got scared luking her daddy like dat…(no doubt evn riddhima ws scared like hell when she saw armaan angry….evry1 knows it..as we also have seen tht)…..she fell dwn hitting her head on da iron post of da slide..and finally crashin on da sand…

Armaan and riddhima both luked in a shock….angel ws jst lying on da ground…but when they both ran towards her….they both jst stood ther…in a state of shock….but when they saw the blood slwly oozing…and soaking da sand….they both lost it….riddhima..fell on ground…and armaan…bent dwn…

Riddhima: angel…..angel…beta…get up sweetie…

Armaan: angel…sweetie..dekho daddy yaha par hai…angel…im sorry beta…I shouted like dat..im sorry beta..now stop foolin me..chalo get….

Though they both saw blood gushin out….they jst cudn c their..their own angel hurt…

Riddhima: armaan…kuch karo…plzzzz fr god sake…meri beti..angel..ka kitna khoon beh gaya hai..plzzzz kuch karo…..and she cries…to her heart…

Armaan.jst picks up angel..and they both rush to da nearest hospital….

They enter da hospital “JEEVAN”…..as they dun wanna waste tym..goin to sannjeevni now as it ws a lil far…..n they wud c to it later….armaan holding angel in his hands….his shirt..completly drenched wid her blood..and da sight of dat…making riddhima shiver….as shez holding angel's head..trying to figure where da blood’s oozing frm so dat she cud stop it…..da nurses and few ward boys approach them….and get a stretcher….he makes her lie dwn on da stretcher….and both of them….wlk briskly wid da stretcher…where angel ws taken fr examination…..and at a point…armaan and riddhima were stopped n not let inside….

Armaan ws held bac by few wrd boys…and riddhima by nurses…as angel ws taken in alone….

Armana: chodho mujhey….im a doctor as well….get ur hands off me…shez my daughter…n im a doctor…frm sanjeevni…MR ARMAAN MALLIK….do u get dat??? He says dis to da ward boys holding him bac…

Doctor: u r…mr mallik..surely a doctor…frm sanjeevni..but not here…and as its my duty…let me handle it….plzzzz…..he says dis kindly to armaan…

Doctor: as u r a relative of hers..

Armaan: FATHER!!!!! IM HER FATHER….!!!!

Doctor: yea certainly…u r..but as u may b knowing dat relative patients r not given to doctors…u know da rule…its there in sanjeevni as well….plzzz co-operate mr mallik…im sure…aftr examination…and lil bit of tests…u cn shift her to sanjeevni…but thts not da call fr da moment..plzz let me do my work..n plzz b co-operative…

Armaan…controlled his anger…pain…frustration bac…by tightening his fists….and standinf there still..as he jst nodded his head giving an indication to da doctor dat he cud go on wid da chek up….but soon….

Da doctor leaves…and sooo does all da nurses n ward boys…

Armaan turns bac….finds..ridhdima…crying…taking da support of da wall…she luks at him…wants him..at dis moment…his support…his shoulders…she luks at him yearningly…he jst luks at her….then suddenly his xpression trns cold…gives her a tuff luk…and makes a quick move frm there…..she knows wher hes goin….but she is jst tooooo numb now..evn to move…as she feels sooo weak….

Aftr a few minutes…..she goes to where armaan is….ofcourse…at da fire-escape…but of dis hospital “JEEVAN”….HES STITTING ON DA STAIRS…CRYING..LIKE AN INNOCENT BABY….(jst da way he ws crying at minnies case)

She cums frm behind….keeps her hand on his shoulder….he luks at her…gets up…tears in his eyes..but he wipes them off…

Armaan moves her hand wid a harsh sway..: u dare!!!!! U dare say anything riddhima….

Riddhima: arr..armaan..kya…..

Armaan: stop it riddhima….u have been soo careless today…..

She goes towards him…wid tears in her eyes…holds his face wid her one hand….hoping she cud cry on his shoulders…but he jst removes her hand…so roughly…

Armaan: and u dare touch me now!!!!

Riddhima is jst shocked…she is still wid angel’s accident…n now armaan behaving like dis…wud break her..: armaan..???

Armaan: dis is all becuz of u…!!!!

Riddima: me???

Armaan: now dun b innocent riddhima…yes its becuz of u…!!!!

Riddhima: armaan yeh kya keh rahe ho….shez our angel..humaari beti hai..wat do u mean.???

Armaan: stop it riddhima…jst stop it….tum itni carelsessness…..

Riddhima: oh ok..jst cuz I dint infrm u abt getting angel..tum aisey keh rahe ho naa??

Armana: meiney itni baar usey awaaz di..ki slide par sey utar jaaye…but u…u toh were jst encouraging her…to play…lik dat..and u wre soo busy counting on me…ryt???

Riddhima: armaan utmhe kya ho gaya hai….?? Y r u behaving like dis….

Armaan: muhjey kya ho gaya hai??? Oh god..riddhima…tum..itni bewakoof toh nahi….ya phir..itni innocent bannti ho…huh??/

Ridhdima: armaan….

Armaan: haan…exactly….or is it tht…u bringin old memories bac…of being heartless…having no feeling..as u had once during those intrns days….???

Dis ws it…dis thing of bringin da old memories..when she had tortured him of not confessin…dat tym…he brought it up again….he knew…dis thing ws her weak point…she ws always guilty of tht..n she told him dat as well…n he knew dat wud jst hurt her…hurt her like a sword passing thru her heart…she remained silent….n then..

Riddihma: armaan…yeh..kya..??...kya…keh….

Armana: haan riddhima sach hi keh raha hu….tum badli hi nahi…tabsey….kehte hai naa..insaan chaahe kitni koshish karle…kahin na kahin..uska who pehlu..woh nature dikh hi jaata hai….. U R RESPONSIBLE FR MY CHILD….MY ANGELS ACCIDENT…U GET DAT…

Riddhima: armaan..plzzz….plzzz yeh mat kaho….not at dis tym…plzzz….

Armaan: riddhima….agar..meri angel ko kuch hua naa….and he jst point out his index finger at her….

She luks at him..so furious..but she ws jst not normal now…she too has had enuff today…..he luking sooo angrily at her…and she wid tears rolling dwn…..

He then…jst…trns his head…n moves out of da fire escape…elaving her all alone….she..now…alone..cold…falling dwn on her knees…crying…recollecting evry word dat armaan has told….she knows dat he doesn’t mean all dat..cuz hes jst angry now….but telling all dat at da moment…ws not da ryt tym….she cud not take all dat…all of it…..



And da part ends here guys…..HOPE U GUYS NJOID IT….will cum wid da next part…soon…



Karan-shilpa forever…as armaan-riddhima forever…

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